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Clo 2

Develop strategies for reading, drafting, collaborating, revising, and editing

When writing an essay, one must think, draft, peer review, revise and edit, then submit.

I never did any peer review on my essays or papers in high school. Only in college, and it was a fun and amazing process. You get to see what your classmates are thinking on the same topic as you, you get to help them do better on their essay and vice versa.

No matter the criticism you get, take it with a grain of salt and look at the best ways to improve your essay. These are some of the reviews I got on my wroks:

“Talk about this marginalization more in your thesis. Like what marginalization do introverts experience and its effects.” – Soha Ahmedshaker, Blended Assignment

The atrocities that Christopher Columbus committed are the reasons why Columbus Day should not be celebrated to honor him.” The thesis is strong, but it lacks some exposition.”- Jan Omitsu, Argumentative Essay Draft